WALT: Retell our experience of camp
WILF: I can use interesting words and write detailed paragraphs
My writing has an introduction, middle and a conclusion
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This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Thursday, 31 March 2016
Easter Break
Friday, 18 March 2016
Zack the Dragon
WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing |
Said Zack, no said the other dragon I fine but thank you for asking. Okay come join in with us if you want to anytime and anywhere and anyplace. Just ask if you want something. The other dragon said “but I am really hungry” Zack said well lucky we brought some sandwiches. There were eating and eating their sandwiches away. Along to their favourite place.
Thursday, 17 March 2016
Wednesday, 16 March 2016
Sir Edmund Hillary
WALT: Use relevant parts of the text to help us answer questions
WALT: Use cues and prior knowledge to help us understand new words
Pirate Treasure
WALT: Narrate a story about a pirate, on an island and treasure is found
WILF: I can add detail and use interesting words
Once upon a time there lived a pirate named Captain Jack Sparrow. He sailed the seven seas with his crew on a huge ship called. The crew ship’s name was the Black Pearl. Jack was a Greedy and selfish man because he would always hit his crew of the boat, Hit them on the head with a frying pan. He was also on an Island. The Island’s name was Never Land.
Tuesday, 15 March 2016
Monday, 14 March 2016
Dictagloos
WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing |
Captain morgan addins was a tyrant. A pirate bent on causing may heaven havice across the seven seas. But also an enemy of british empire. Along with his crew they had broughten smaller ships this will change with curst treasure of baby james loved it.
Thursday, 10 March 2016
Mount Taranaki
WALT: Make inferences and respond to key information from the text
WALT: Share facts and information about Mt Taranaki
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Monday, 7 March 2016
Volcanoes in Auckland
Here are some of my volcanoes that I have been l learning about. Here are some littel tips.
Dictagloss
WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writingZack was ecstatic but also curious. What was a night shiny armour doing out inside the middle of the forest? Let a loan wanted to play with the dragon’s. Didn't he know that they were meant enemies after all? Surely he’s up to something. It’s up to Zack to find out this night’s secret's.
My score was 15 out of 15
Friday, 4 March 2016
Cat At The Beach
It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Lishana the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. Her master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly her friend Byrana came along. She was looking very sorry for herself. She was walking, but her head was facing down. Her eyes rolled back she looked unhappy.
Because she was hungry and went looking for food. When Lishana’s master came out of the crystal water she had caught 4 fish. He said hello Bryana, Bryana said hello he said what is wrong, Bryana said I am a starving and a homeless. Bryana said what is your name
Thursday, 3 March 2016
The Special Ride
Walt: Identify the main ideas in the text Find which sentence best shows the picture
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Wednesday, 2 March 2016
Narrative Camping
Walt: Narrate a story that includes an orientation, problem and solution
“Do you see that light there just keep going straight into the light and you will find your way back home in no time. Thank you Mr Rabbitte “said Syriah. She finally found her way back home and she was happy. She said mom and dad I have been exploring out in the forest. It was so cool. I meet Mr Rabbitte.
One day there was a girl named Syriah. She went camping with her friend’s and family. She went exploring around and then she fell through this big hole that took her to the forest. When she fell she heard a large ROAR!!. She heard growling noises. Her friend’s called her and called her she never answered.
Syriah saw Mr Rabbitte. She said “hello Mr Rabbit can you help me? I am lost”. Syriah said where am I?. Mr Rabbitte said you are in North America. Can you tell me how to get home? “Yes” Mr Rabbitte said “anything for you”.
“Do you see that light there just keep going straight into the light and you will find your way back home in no time. Thank you Mr Rabbitte “said Syriah. She finally found her way back home and she was happy. She said mom and dad I have been exploring out in the forest. It was so cool. I meet Mr Rabbitte.
Tuesday, 1 March 2016
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